A Love Doesn’t Meant To be

Don’t ask me why i am writing this poem. This poem written 7 years ago.. I used to think a lot and write a lot love letters and poetry during my youngest day.. i remember this poem written somewhere in 2001-2002. There just so many bad and wonderful things happened to me on that years which i still treasure until now…

Sometimes i just wonder..how an ordinary man like me can wrote something like that just to express my sad feelings..i know it is funny..i don’t know how but i guess it is just because of my deep feelings towards someone… and i always love her…

You know what is bad of being romantic and melancholy? You will kill yourself just because of LOVE. I went to that process and i don’t want to be in that situations again.. for that..i told myself not to sir with love…. (sometimes..i just forgot how is the feeling of missing someone…love someone..hmmm)

Anyway enjoy the poem ya!

I used to tease and laugh at you
Making you mad is what I do
Then I realized something new
I realized I’m in love with you
You make me smile
when I’m feeling blue
I can’t seem to get enough of you
And when I see you through the window sill
My heart beats like a drill
To you I’d give my all
I’d even give my heart and soul
I’ll do anything for you
Just tell me what you want me to do
Even if you don’t love me I still love you
Cause for me loving you is not hard to do
I can’t easily let you go
Cause I really love you so

If i were to ask you to rate my poem.. what will be the rating (1-5) 1 is the lowest and 5 is the max :P

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Comments (30)

JaneFebruary 29th, 2008 at 3:09 am

Oh my god! what a lovely poetry you got there…What happen to you man.. Hmmm i guess the feelings is so deep..until you can come up with such a lovely and touching poem..

How i wish my man…will give me such a lovely poem..i’ll definitely marry him! you are asking for a rating for this poem? I rate it for 6/5

Am sorry but this poem really touch me..hmm..sad sad..sad..

ElainEFebruary 29th, 2008 at 1:29 pm

ben…that’s a really touching poem… If my man did such poem for me… I’d be really lucky to have him… ratings for it? 5/5,6/5,7/5,8/5,9/5,10/5 :)

olcaFebruary 29th, 2008 at 2:15 pm

Wow! this is cool! that is really touching ben..really really..touching….

daveFebruary 29th, 2008 at 2:15 pm

When you are in love, you can do almost everything. Like how you did with your poem. nice poem.

Man-DFebruary 29th, 2008 at 11:13 pm

whoaaaa Ben…I donno you write english poem as well…kekeke…I give you 4 out of 5…eventhough it’s good but it’s not perfect (professional comment..lol)…but my comment as a friend, this is Benny expressing himself and everything that comes from the heart is the most perfect masterpiece…*two thumbs up*…

lukeMarch 1st, 2008 at 9:43 am

i think during that period it must be exciting for u kan ben?let me see if i can do one poem bout love too..hmmm,ah well,my brain isnt as actively in love like it used to but i still have some juices of love poems in me…hehehhe

bennyMarch 1st, 2008 at 10:18 am

Jane: I think that is not me.. That is totally not me..am sorry to tell…lols.. :P the real benny is here…now lols..Anyway thanks for the rating ya!

Elaine: Ko juga la sa sayang.. sampai over over tu rating ah? KA ah? hehehhe Hmmm if ah? hehehhe You will don’t worry k..u will…

Olca: Welcome to bennyliew.com and thanks for visiting. Touching..did you actually cried? :P kidding..kidding :P

Mandy: Ooooh…Sampai hati ah..tia kasi sa rating 4.9 / 5 :P hehhe Well i submitted this poem to…an online poetry site.. Won nothing lols…it is still there..and will be there..forever..i guess i have another two poem with me..will post it once i have the love moods lols..

Luke: Super damn exciting i think…During that time..i can pretty sure..the world is mine..everything are so sweet..and lovely..wonderful days..and whatever wonderful things you can imagine when you are in Love..

Man-DMarch 1st, 2008 at 12:05 pm

Ben, that is for professional rating lah…so that U don’t get over excited…bah, post some more of your lovey dovey poem k…wahahaha…Benny, Benny…when love mood strick lah kan? OK OK…mo man tai

bennyMarch 1st, 2008 at 2:24 pm

Mandy: Ooooh like that ah.. :P hehhe ok ok..sa faham……ba nanti when the mood strike..i’ll post the poem la k…

ElainEMarch 1st, 2008 at 3:44 pm

ben..over-over kah my ratings? hahaha I didn’t mean for it to be like that.. What I’m trying to say is that the poem touched me! way to go Ben… next time.. Can u write a poem for me? lolz I haven’t received any by far… haha…u write one for me… I belanja u makan when I get back.. can? :)

bennyMarch 1st, 2008 at 3:55 pm

Elaine: Wah sure or not u never had one..? Hmmm tau tau…more than like 10 nie..and you can’t even remember one verse nie lols.. :P

ElainEMarch 1st, 2008 at 4:01 pm

ben: serious ba.. haha..will u do one for me? :)

Man-DMarch 1st, 2008 at 4:27 pm

Elaine, to do the love poem kan, mesti benny fall in love with u first barulah its perfect…unless mmg dia…tett…tuttt…tittt…jj lagi…hehehe…

ElainEMarch 1st, 2008 at 7:16 pm

mandy: girl…u are so good at KA-ing o kan about these kind of topics… hahaha dun make me start on u o hahaha… but I know one thing’s for sure.. Ben mmg sayang me ba kan? Muahahahahaha JJ!

Man-DMarch 1st, 2008 at 8:54 pm

KA-ing is gud sometimes..in our circle of friendship, it brings all of us very close…hehehe…well Laine, I o agree on ‘Benny sayang U’ coz only u he call ‘dear’… ;) ok ok…nti u ksh kena me lagi…wakakaka!!!

MaeMarch 2nd, 2008 at 10:17 am

ahahahaha..
Ben… buat 1 utk elaine.. yg teda ALKOHOL or karaoke-ing or… any any. haahahahaha….
tis cute girl… mo rasa juga ada 1 poem… hmm.. LOVE POEM utk dia. siap kasi FRAME.. mesti dia tersedu-sedan TERHARu..!!

Laine… a LOVE POEM…?!! or just any POEM with any topic will do?!! hmmm…?!! muahahahahaha… JJ… JJ… hahahahahaha…!!

ElainEMarch 2nd, 2008 at 11:11 am

mandy: girl… hahaha u really want me to start on this dun u.. haha…ben calls everybody else dear also la..adehdeh…. dun make me start on u and…heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh :P

Mae: betul tu…yg teda alcohol and karaoke-ing ok~ hahaha siap kasih frame? melebih-lebih la ba tu Mae.. ko sindir se nie kan!!! hahahahahaha tia pa tia pa…se terima kenyataan… hahahaha I want a love poem!!!!!!!

Man-DMarch 2nd, 2008 at 11:52 am

ok ok laine…sa angkat ‘bendera putih’…tp sblm tu, Luke pun agree, only U ja c Ben panggil ‘DEAR’…lol…bah…itu ja…teda lagi KA lps ni…muahahaha…

Ben, Elaine minta love poem…

bennyliew.comMarch 3rd, 2008 at 6:38 am

Elaine : i will once am in love with u can..?:P (now baru 50% mesti mau another 50%

Man-DMarch 3rd, 2008 at 10:43 am

Elaine, wahahahaha…Benny tu slalu 50% ja tu, nda pandai tambah lagi lps tu, sana² ja…so ko sabar² jalah k…hehehe…

Ben, ;) <— Sedang hangat berCINTA!!!

ElainEMarch 3rd, 2008 at 1:49 pm

ben: oh!!! sampai hati o! baru 50%? hahahahah nda pa nda pa.. se sedar jua siapa diriku ini… hahaha insan yg lemah…dan terpinggir..hahahaha nda pa nda pa… ba ya la… I will look for otr ppl to write me a nice poem la…

mandy: hey mandy! I heard abt the news.. good for u babes! :) Be happy k! He’s one lucky guy!

MaeMarch 4th, 2008 at 4:02 am

manD… sedang HANGAT BERCINTA ka?!! jeng jeng jeng….!!!

elaine.. camana ko begitu JAUH ko tau, napa sa yg dekat2 ni.. dak tau?!! sepa?! kita or sa KENAL ka?!! hmm…

manD… w/pun baru berputik-putik.. apa salahnya.. kasi kenal2, kalau yg dak kenal. kalau dah kenal… sebut ja NAMA pendek. kekekekeke..!! wakakakaka…!!

ben: baru 50% ka?!! ehmm.. huiii.. ngam2 separuh tu tau… buli-buli sudah ba tu… lain la kalau 30% or 40%… jauh lagi… kalau dah 50%… ok sudah tu… buli JALAN sudah tu IDEA. ben.. jangan lupa.. Elaine minta LOVE POEM ah bukan yg lain2.

BlogHopperzMarch 5th, 2008 at 2:59 am

I know for sure, this is not for me.. :p But if what you told me was true, then I can guess which one was the one who stole your heart and never had return it to u :p

bennyMarch 5th, 2008 at 3:13 am

Mandy: As if you know my love will go up till 50% MAx ni..aiyo i am not a static person ba.. lols..worst come to worst it will go down to 10% lols :O

Mae: Ya mandy sedang hangat.. :P, 50% can go on sudah ba..the problem is jauh ba elaine…:P hehehe.and have to by pass cindy lagi adeh..matai..tahi lalat dia laie dkat mulut matai oku.. Love poem to akan datang sendiri…don’t worry ah elaine…

Bloghopperz: Hmm welcome to bennyliew.com ya..thanks for visiting..If you remembered.. heheh
If ah :P which i think u still. i think you can guess :P hehehe… i think she returned my heart already….that is when i started to forget how is the feelings being in love again lols..

melleMarch 5th, 2008 at 4:16 am

ben: “i think she returned my heart already”…?? kesian ko ben…btw…nice poem!! love to read it!!

mae,manD,Elaine,luke,ben: miss you guys!!! sorry sa tidak aktif lg masuk blog ni mo baca2 …neway…still miss you all!!

MaeMarch 5th, 2008 at 6:04 am

elleh… time DEKAT2 ko dak apil..!! ooo.. bila jauh baru ada RASA2 skit la kan. wakakakakaka…!! ya ya.. begitu la manusia. bila d depan mata, tidak di hargai.. bila dah jauh, bagi alasan jauh plak.

ben.. kalau pasal c cindutt tu.. ala la.. apa juga ADA sama dia punya tahi lalat d dekat mulut tu. jangan ko perduli tu… biar c afad ja yg JAGA area sana & area-area yg lain. lols.. wakakakaka…!!

by pass cindutt.. ba mmg la ba… KAKAK dia plak. mana la tau.. ko saja2 mo kasi NANGIS adik kesayangan dia tu… mmg sure ko kena keroyok la!! dont play2 o Ben. ahahahahaha…!!

Laine.. kami mengumpat ko secara terang terangan ni.. ehem..!! iya la.. since ko MINTA LOVE POEM dr c Ben. sa jadi KIPAS SATE la kijab. ni juga kerana c MAND dak mo JOIN kipas sate ni.. so, sa ganti la.

CinDuttMarch 5th, 2008 at 7:23 am

weii ben tai lalat pelahan sikit ah… pantang nenek sa…. iskkkkkkkkkkk…………. fying kick nie

Man-DMarch 5th, 2008 at 11:18 am

Ben…ya, tulah sa tau…ko punya max sana ja tu 50% (ko juga yang cakap) n terus menurun ja…kekekeke…returned your heart ar? cam sa pun blh guess ni…lol…

Elaine…ya..ya..tankiu again (ni kali dalam Benny punya blog pula)…duii, mo juga promo bah!

Mae, nda juga lah hangat bercinta, cuma menghargai cinta ja…

Cin, tahi lalat di mulut tu, ada maksud lain tu tau…apa bilang Afad tu…hebat tettt….tutttt…titttt…KA oh…!

Melle, miss u too gurl…lama nda jumpa ko… ;)

Man-DMarch 5th, 2008 at 3:25 pm

uiikkksss, correction! When I put sana, Ben ;) , wat I mean is not me, Im reffering to Ben lah!

ElainEMarch 5th, 2008 at 5:11 pm

melle: hey babes! missing u too!!

mandy: hehe you’re most welcome!

cindy: aiks..terasa…hahaha tahi lalat! muahahahahaha hebat tutt tutt tuttt ah?

Ben: ooo pasal over jauh la? hahahahahaha JJ!!!!! it’s okay la about the love poem…one day I will get a guy to write me such poem since u so linc! hahaha :P

mae: nie betul2 mengumpat depan2 o kan… yg teda2 nie….kena…adehdeh…huhuhu

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